Forever Charmed

Subject: Forever Charmed Thu Jul 25, 2013 8:39 pm

My Mom got me into this show Before she died! This is realy the one of the only things keeping her alive in my mind everyday as I wacth it on Netflix! I have been working on this siecne my mom died A Script Called Forever Charmed and no Im not making a movie or anything like that! Don't get me wrong I would love to but as my health the way its been I don't even know If I can finish the Script! Anyway I copied Some of this from the comic book but have added stuff to the scene. I just would like to share it with u guys this only the first dreft and I haven't used spellcheck on it yet! Here u go......

Quote :: We fade into theliving room of Piper’s House. Piper is sitting on the couch. There is a pizza box on the table. Pheope walk’s in to the living room.

Pheope-What Happen to the food Tasting?

Piper-The meal didn’t agree with me. Maybe now isn’t the best time to open a Restaurant. I think Melinda’s Coming into her power.

Pheope- I know the feeling. Prue Teleported me today. Repeatedly. What did mel do?

Piper-Attacked me with a Giant Salad.

Paige walk’s into the living room.

Paige-Juvenile Delinquents!

Paige put The Book of Shadod’s down on the table.

Paige-The next Geneeration of witches will be the death of us. Take my word on this.

Paige sit’s down on the couch.

Paige-Isn’t life supposed to be easier now that we’ve beaten the demon’s into submission?

Pheope- Just wait till the twins start using their power’s.

Piper-Yeah but I’ll still take grief over fighting Zankou anyday.

Then they start to laugh.

Leo come’s in and look’s at the pizza box.

Leo-I thought you were making dinner tonight?

Piper-Don’t ask!!!!

Piper- You guy’s still coming with me to check out possable place’s for my Restaurant?

Pheope- Yeah! As long as Prue dosen’t teleport me again.

Paige-I’ll will be there too! To make sure it’s not a dump like though’s other one’s were.

Piper-The guy’s said it use’s to be a hot place to go!

Paige-Yeah for The fire Department!

Pheope- She’s got you there!

Piper- Very Funny Guy’s!

We fade out.

Subject: Re: Forever Charmed Sat Jul 27, 2013 7:38 pm

I'm not into Charmed nor do I have experience with the series but your script looks okay.
My mother is also a huge fan of charmed.
Keep at script writing man, even if you write scripts that are not as good as other ones you have just keep writing, it's the only way to hone your skills in creative writing.
Furthermore if it's an enjoyment then keep at it man, don't loose the dream and keep your chin up about your mother, she would be proud to see you making scripts for charmed.
You never know, one day you might end up writing for a show like charmed.

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