Rate this metal / alt. metal bands lyrics please

Its actually Croatian band, I translated it into English, and I want to see what ppl r thinking of it








After all these years, feeling still the same,
The same old thoughts overflowing my mind.

Days are passing by, the longest hours of my life...
Im thinking of life I had before, life without worries
That feeling is gone, now I feel like Im doomed for enternity

Life of this sane person, this perfect life...
Only thin line between madness and freedom Ive had before
I can still hear them saying "Let him go, he wont last for long"

Sitting in the corner of the this cold room, is this what is left behind?
Is it all lost, is there a way back? I still remember my plans and hopes... All lost...
My mind is locked, there is no way out, this feeling... Choking... Dying... In need of fresh air...

Still after all the pain, my body... Still aliveeee... Eating me from inside...
I am unknown, slave to myself... I do my best, looking for keeeey to exit this cage of insanity...
is this it? is this the end?

Tell me honey, what was the cause? Why is it so hard to understand?
I fought my way from bottom of hell to come to heaven... And you pushed me back in even deeper?
For what? Stuck there... Not giving up...







END THIS SUFFERING, I AM NO DOLL OF YOURS!
RELEASE ME FROM THIS TORMENT, GIVE ME BACK MY AIR!
MY AIR, MY AIR, MY AIR...
GIVE ME BACK MY AIR!






Cant find a god damn way out, no God will save me...
In need of savior...

NOOOW!



Can I leave loved ones behind?
Hating this night... The feeling itself...
This night will be night of pain, the night I always fear of...

Feel so lost, so closed inside of me, locked up, no way out...
Release me from all this pain... Share my pain...
Proud to be the very part of this sane person...
Now I lock myself inside, letting nobody inside meeeee...

This insanity...

My own gift... My own curse... My whole life...

And nobody will take it away from me...

NEVER AGAIN! NO MORE, THIS IS THE LINE, BLOW MY MIND, BEFORE I BLOW MYSELF AWAY!
BLOWWW
BLOWWW


BLOWWWWWWWW!!!!


And still, I can hear him saying "You had your chance kid, Its all over now"
No old man, It just began... Oh yes... Now its time to reveal the truth that has been hidden for a long time
A story of this fallen warrior... Story of his life...

Fighting back the evil... nobody... Nobody...

NOBODY

Nobody will take this away from me....




He sensed his end... Is this his final stand?
Did he pass the line of no return?
And same old feeling on his mind as he is fading away...
His final thoughts... Staying with hiiiiim... forever...

He is... Oh yes, heeee is... In need of fresh air...



Now it feels like its over... Is it really over?
He can still hear the old man... Who was that guy?
Cant get over it... stuck in this afterlife...
Is it all pure imagination? Is this really happening?
It seems its all over... Droping down...

Dead...


He is just... Just, in need of fresh air...

Air...


AIIIIR!